Tuesday, December 9

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The shelter burned and rumbled like a freight train, while the flames sucked at the air.

The shelter burned, and the flames sucked at the air, while rumbling like a freight train.

The flames rumbled like a freight train, and sucked at the air as the shelter burned.

As the flames sucked at the air and rumbled like a freight train, the shelter burned.

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