Sentence Combining

Cole struggled to shift his position, while the ground was uneven, and stiffness had set into his joints like hardened cement.

Cole grimaced, as he struggled to raise his right knee, but he couldn't.

All Cole's life had been haunted by helplessness nightmares.

Cole's Circle Justice

If I was on Cole's Circle Justice. I would have said he is a troubled teen with anger problems. I would have suggested jail for 1 year, and have him pay half the hospital fees for Peter.

Sentence Correcting

His daughter asked a question, and it was a difficult moment.

The fog was thick, so it was hard to see.

He felt sick as he got ready to throw the grenade.

He threw the grenade, and it made a sound.

Kiowa gave him some advice, but it didn't help.

He gets upset when he thinks about the war.

Winter Break

My winter break was fun. Mostly I hung out with my best friend. On Christmas I got some pants, a little game, and a couple other things. I had Christmas dinner at my friend Michelles house. My New years was pretty fun. I was at my best friends house, and I drank a little cup of champagne.
When it snowed in the first week. I took pictures with my best friend. Outside was so cold, but it was fun. For Christmas, I got my best friend some speakers for his ipod. I think he liked it, but I dont no for sure. December 18th was my sisters birthday. We went bowling but I lost. I still had fun though.