Thursday, January 15
Angry Time
There was this one time I got mad at my sister, because she kept on being loud when I was trying to sleep. I yelled at her and told her to shut up. Then my mom got into it, because my little sisters were sleep. But my mom got her to be quiet. What I could have done in the first place is get my mom, and she would have handled it with out any yelling.
Wednesday, January 14
Sentence Combining
Cole shuddered, and spasmed, because he had chills, and Rosy shoved Edwin lightly.
Cole sipped the glass of water, as she held the glass to his lips, and he struggled to swallow the pills.
Cole closed his eyes, as Rosy cleaned and bandaged his opened wounds.
Cole sipped the glass of water, as she held the glass to his lips, and he struggled to swallow the pills.
Cole closed his eyes, as Rosy cleaned and bandaged his opened wounds.
Thursday, January 8
Sentence Combining
Cole struggled to shift his position, while the ground was uneven, and stiffness had set into his joints like hardened cement.
Cole grimaced, as he struggled to raise his right knee, but he couldn't.
All Cole's life had been haunted by helplessness nightmares.
Cole grimaced, as he struggled to raise his right knee, but he couldn't.
All Cole's life had been haunted by helplessness nightmares.
Wednesday, January 7
Cole's Circle Justice
If I was on Cole's Circle Justice. I would have said he is a troubled teen with anger problems. I would have suggested jail for 1 year, and have him pay half the hospital fees for Peter.
Tuesday, January 6
Sentence Correcting
His daughter asked a question, and it was a difficult moment.
The fog was thick, so it was hard to see.
He felt sick as he got ready to throw the grenade.
He threw the grenade, and it made a sound.
Kiowa gave him some advice, but it didn't help.
He gets upset when he thinks about the war.
The fog was thick, so it was hard to see.
He felt sick as he got ready to throw the grenade.
He threw the grenade, and it made a sound.
Kiowa gave him some advice, but it didn't help.
He gets upset when he thinks about the war.
Monday, January 5
Winter Break
My winter break was fun. Mostly I hung out with my best friend. On Christmas I got some pants, a little game, and a couple other things. I had Christmas dinner at my friend Michelles house. My New years was pretty fun. I was at my best friends house, and I drank a little cup of champagne.
When it snowed in the first week. I took pictures with my best friend. Outside was so cold, but it was fun. For Christmas, I got my best friend some speakers for his ipod. I think he liked it, but I dont no for sure. December 18th was my sisters birthday. We went bowling but I lost. I still had fun though.
When it snowed in the first week. I took pictures with my best friend. Outside was so cold, but it was fun. For Christmas, I got my best friend some speakers for his ipod. I think he liked it, but I dont no for sure. December 18th was my sisters birthday. We went bowling but I lost. I still had fun though.
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